Strangers “Tim” (Simon Pegg) a struggling comic book artist and “Daisy” (Jessica Stevenson) a wannabe journalist, cross paths in a Cafe in North London. After meeting they find out that they both are looking for a new place to live. Tim is looking for a new home after splitting with his girlfriend and Daisy wants to leave the house full of wasters she currently lives with. They meet every day in the cafe looking for new homes in different newspapers, magazines and advertisements until they find the perfect home. But there’s a catch, “Professional couples only.” Tim and Daisy decide to pretend to be a couple in order to try and get the flat.
Strangers “Tim” (Simon Pegg) a struggling comic book artist and “Daisy” (Jessica Stevenson) a wannabe journalist, cross paths in a Cafe in North London. After meeting they find out that they both are looking for a new place to live. Tim is looking for a new home after splitting with his girlfriend and Daisy wants to leave the house full of wasters she currently lives with. They meet every day in the cafe looking for new homes in different newspapers, magazines and advertisements until they find the perfect home. But there’s a catch, “Professional couples only.” Tim and Daisy decide to pretend to be a couple in order to try and get the flat.
this is a good effort, including all the right details - but it reads too much like a review. A synopsis is setting up an idea and selling it. Its not reviewing it. Write in the present tense about HOW it WOULD be. Good effort though.
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