STORY TELLING UNIT: "The Meeting" story development

After much thought I have decided to change the start of my story from Sid losing his job to him being a struggling writer who is annoyed and fed up of getting his manuscript rejected. I have also changed the time scale of the whole story from a couple of months to one major week before jumping ahead two weeks at the end. By doing this I believe it will make my script more achievable in a ten minute time period.